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Grow, little flower

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HAI !
So, here is my last one. I took soooooo long >.<
Over 900 frames. And a photoshop which was starting to tell me to go away. *sigh*

But here it is !
I'm very happy with the first part. The second one with the sun is a less "well" animated because of my laziness >.>
The lasso was a pain.
But it's not totally awful, I think :p it made me progress (or hope so), so I'm happy of it, anyway.

Hope you enjoy it \o/

*It's fully open to critiques*

PS: Photoshop killed me.
EDIT: 1000 favs in less than 12 hours. Oh gawd.

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is an AMAZING emoticon! First off let me say that I actually decided to suggest this as a DD. The work is really that amazing. Now onto a critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

First off, I really love that your emoticons show a story. It is a brilliant idea and you do it perfectly.

The work that must have taken for this emote is enormous. I look at my emotes that take me 5 hours to complete with maybe 100 frames at most. And I see this and see that amount of work turn into nothingness!

Now then critique 'eh?

Well I am going to be hard on you because I know you're such an amazing artist that you can take it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

1. I really love the facial expressions! But they aren't very original. I think you could maybe play around with them even more and really make them more personalized!

2. The sun is my least favorite part. I feel that the expression and way it was depicted doesn't match. For example, the color seems just a little off?

3. The ending of this emote really ends with the crown disappearing and the flower having a 'reset' button hit (lol). It would be much better if it all went out and the flower bounced back in or something along those lines.

Now for the good stuff:

1. The colors of the emoticon and shading is awesome! Really great job there

2. The flower is perfect! I love that a non expressive flower can really tell a story in it's own!

3. I like how you made the jumps of the emote different than other people have. This gives it more of a personal touch great job there as well!

This is what I consider a perfect piece. Everything is 5/5 (excluding Originality, as I have seen shorter pieces like this one before, but even so 4.5/5 there <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle"/>)

Keep up the amazing work!

Best,

=TimberClipse